tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post5551337922219049603..comments2023-10-24T00:38:48.463+10:00Comments on Journeys in Creative Writing: PATERNITY Episode 4 - an Aussie Mystery NovelJune Savillehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00194576632686640776noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post-82773364530808502622016-12-26T17:12:28.440+10:002016-12-26T17:12:28.440+10:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09985601961608033969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post-19244618219712877022016-12-12T01:58:45.088+10:002016-12-12T01:58:45.088+10:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.Dalia Alaahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07072572380100348335noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post-80252135348488636192016-12-12T01:58:10.869+10:002016-12-12T01:58:10.869+10:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.Dalia Alaahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07072572380100348335noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post-12849807252144111352009-01-08T07:01:00.000+10:002009-01-08T07:01:00.000+10:00If you have powerful friends Laura - I'd look at a...If you have powerful friends Laura - I'd look at any offer!<BR/>Thanks for enjoying Pip's story.June Savillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00194576632686640776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post-49923219399553912582009-01-08T04:58:00.000+10:002009-01-08T04:58:00.000+10:00You are amazing! I can see this kind of story on A...You are amazing! I can see this kind of story on American television show Law and Order SVU (special victims unit). Thank you so much for sharing your writing with us and Happy New Year June.Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18183043671142742318noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post-41752093941174437502008-11-27T03:12:00.000+10:002008-11-27T03:12:00.000+10:00PS for Shadow'Paternity' is already a full novel t...PS for Shadow<BR/>'Paternity' is already a full novel that has gone through many many drafts. However, as is The Way of Writing I have now discovered a way of creating a better ending. <BR/><BR/>What's happened of course is that the new ending will require other changes in the text so I am having to be very careful about anything I post. <BR/><BR/>I didn't want to spoil things by giving everybody a read that was half baked. That's the reason for the shorter episode posted last time when I was going away. <BR/><BR/>I'm sure you will be happier with the result though. It's worth the hiccup!<BR/>Cheers<BR/>JuneJune Savillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00194576632686640776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post-22288636061042222742008-11-26T22:00:00.000+10:002008-11-26T22:00:00.000+10:00Hi again Shadow Gosh don't be sorry! I appreciate ...Hi again Shadow <BR/>Gosh don't be sorry! I appreciate it. It's just that blog awards were taking up so much time and I need that for writing. See ya soon. <BR/>Cheers<BR/>JuneJune Savillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00194576632686640776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post-88424450991160381452008-11-26T21:49:00.000+10:002008-11-26T21:49:00.000+10:00oooops, sorry, didn't see it. consider it a 'thank...oooops, sorry, didn't see it. consider it a 'thank you' for a story-in-the-making i'm loving so far...Shadowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05999801833389058410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post-4324777807425444472008-11-26T20:43:00.000+10:002008-11-26T20:43:00.000+10:00KateI do hope Rob is better and that you're gettin...Kate<BR/>I do hope Rob is better and that you're getting more sleep!<BR/>I will post some more pix of Sydney very soon - to prove that it has a character of its own. <BR/>I wish (how I wish) I still lived within cooee of Sydney so I could visit more often - and then I could have met up with your friends. <BR/>About your Dad - I do think your own writing of his story will make a difference. I may have said to you before - it's a bit like writing a letter about something that bugs you and then not posting it. The writing is the thing ...June Savillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00194576632686640776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post-84788416296501299472008-11-26T20:39:00.000+10:002008-11-26T20:39:00.000+10:00Cheryl - I'd certainly go with that myself. Next ...Cheryl - I'd certainly go with that myself. <BR/>Next post very soon. <BR/>Cheers<BR/>JJune Savillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00194576632686640776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post-28856302322769797362008-11-26T20:38:00.000+10:002008-11-26T20:38:00.000+10:00This last remark was for Braja ... Thanks mate!J.This last remark was for Braja ... Thanks mate!<BR/>J.June Savillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00194576632686640776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post-80635038267784220752008-11-26T20:36:00.000+10:002008-11-26T20:36:00.000+10:00Sorry if it looked as though I was teasing - not t...Sorry if it looked as though I was teasing - not true!<BR/>Thing was I posted last moment before I set off to a conference for three days and wanted to leave all of you loyal 'Paternity' fans with SOMETHING, even though perhaps a little shorter than usual. <BR/>Will make up with the next episode ... as soon as I come down to earth again. Life does get in the way of blogging occasionally. <BR/>Did you enjoy ep 4? <BR/>JuneJune Savillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00194576632686640776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post-85726753483811792362008-11-26T20:33:00.000+10:002008-11-26T20:33:00.000+10:00Thanks Shadow - much appreciated. I left a messag...Thanks Shadow - much appreciated. I left a message on your blog ... <BR/>I had a look at the other links too and I agree they're beauties. <BR/>Cheers<BR/>JuneJune Savillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00194576632686640776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post-77839300812694110252008-11-26T17:16:00.000+10:002008-11-26T17:16:00.000+10:00Jeannie that's the point isn't it? To each his ow...Jeannie that's the point isn't it? To each his own ...<BR/>Cheers<BR/>JuneJune Savillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00194576632686640776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post-30363160082967042142008-11-26T09:55:00.000+10:002008-11-26T09:55:00.000+10:00I agree June, I not only would want to know - I wo...I agree June, I not only would want to know - I would need to know ! For instance, I really have a need to know about my Dad and how he came to be brought up with another family. I need to know too why his name was changed - weird ? So I definitely, like Pip would 'need' to know. By the by my Sister in law and her husband are going to Oz in 4 weeks to spend time with her friend of 40 years and she's going to Sydney, I'll pass on the photos on yer blog to give her an idea of what it looks like, though to be honest it kind of reminds me of Edinburgh and Oslo in Norway.. only the sun is shining in Sydney - we're stuck here with grey skies and cold mornings (with frost on car windows)... I had to scrape the ice off this morning when I took Rob to the Doc's.. Cheers for now 'cos it's now nearly midnight again and I've got another appointment with Rob to rub his gel on his back and pass him his Diazapam at 7 am tomorrow. (to relax his muscle spasms in his back) Methinks he is acting up a bit like most men his injured back is Broken - aye right! (typical man - he exaggerates ) ! Bye, Kate x.Katehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16979505705280901138noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post-28479905867204536412008-11-26T06:58:00.000+10:002008-11-26T06:58:00.000+10:00I would want to know if only to silence the past a...I would want to know if only to silence the past and to move forward. Cherylcherylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04907967489094621351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post-39893955072839650962008-11-25T18:51:00.000+10:002008-11-25T18:51:00.000+10:00Hey June: just finished reading pt. 4...you making...Hey June: just finished reading pt. 4...you making them shorter to deliberately tease us?!♥ Brajahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07693196044262677095noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post-41551207199432883152008-11-25T18:27:00.000+10:002008-11-25T18:27:00.000+10:00please come and have a look at this...http://gsp-s...please come and have a look at this...<BR/><BR/>http://gsp-shadow.blogspot.com/2008/11/superior-scribbler.htmlShadowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05999801833389058410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post-62297290683934347702008-11-24T11:01:00.000+10:002008-11-24T11:01:00.000+10:00Some secrets are best left uncovered, but I person...Some secrets are best left uncovered, but I personally would rather know the truth. I can understand both decisions though.Jeanniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15118103744959559899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post-49530346881083498582008-11-24T06:19:00.000+10:002008-11-24T06:19:00.000+10:00Hi JudyYes, this need does seem to have been a con...Hi Judy<BR/>Yes, this need does seem to have been a constant with Pip doesn't it? I am one of those people who likes to know what truth they're dealing with and then decide on how to work with it.June Savillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00194576632686640776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post-80428168349562861682008-11-24T06:16:00.000+10:002008-11-24T06:16:00.000+10:00Yes ConfusedI do think the elephant in the room is...Yes Confused<BR/>I do think the elephant in the room is the character/emotional need of those involved. And as you infer this can change with circumstances. <BR/>JuneJune Savillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00194576632686640776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post-85041068098420312312008-11-24T05:51:00.000+10:002008-11-24T05:51:00.000+10:00I would have to know. She has come this far and wo...I would have to know. She has come this far and wondered all her life about her mother's secret. No matter how bad it was I would think she could not control the desire to know the whole truth about something that had been a mystery to her for as long as she could remember.Judyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12078537002880283509noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post-28770784838008685642008-11-23T23:46:00.000+10:002008-11-23T23:46:00.000+10:00Perspective is like a shadow it shape changes with...Perspective is like a shadow it shape changes with the lightAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post-74713704285095508392008-11-23T21:32:00.000+10:002008-11-23T21:32:00.000+10:00Yep Shadow - perspective is central. Thanks for th...Yep Shadow - perspective is central. Thanks for the visit.June Savillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00194576632686640776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post-15155892928357612112008-11-23T21:02:00.000+10:002008-11-23T21:02:00.000+10:00reactions differ according to our involvement in t...reactions differ according to our involvement in the facts...Shadowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05999801833389058410noreply@blogger.com