tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post3373185902356659144..comments2023-10-24T00:38:48.463+10:00Comments on Journeys in Creative Writing: What a Picnic! - Episode 15 of 'Paternity' an Australian Mystery NovelJune Savillehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00194576632686640776noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post-92128976841977145872009-01-25T15:08:00.000+10:002009-01-25T15:08:00.000+10:00Yes Cheryl - quality rathr than quantity! I wonder...Yes Cheryl - quality rathr than quantity! I wonder what will happen next?June Savillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00194576632686640776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post-14259026550524718682009-01-25T13:14:00.000+10:002009-01-25T13:14:00.000+10:00A short one but a goodun ! Now the plot thickens,...A short one but a goodun ! Now the plot thickens, hhmmmmmmmm Cherylcherylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04907967489094621351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post-20465157713809970892009-01-22T06:55:00.000+10:002009-01-22T06:55:00.000+10:00Oooooooo, what is he going to tell her? I must kno...Oooooooo, what is he going to tell her? I must know! Brilliant June! I love it,, keep going! :-)DJ Roguehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04432389983913074776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post-30885284600767001542009-01-20T20:26:00.000+10:002009-01-20T20:26:00.000+10:00CATHERINE Thanks for the nice words. I don't know ...CATHERINE <BR/>Thanks for the nice words. <BR/>I don't know whether Frank would stretch to strawberries and cream - but he is full of surprises. <BR/>JuneJune Savillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00194576632686640776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post-84764667010496890372009-01-20T19:06:00.000+10:002009-01-20T19:06:00.000+10:00‘That’s okay. Shoot.’ OoooohHhh... what is Frank a...‘That’s okay. Shoot.’ OoooohHhh... what is Frank about to divulge??? (I can't believe you ended it on that note (lol)) June - another strong, well-written chapter. p.s. I absolutely love picnics and with strawberries and cream to finish off too!CathMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14143141734424055810noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post-72301428088629418622009-01-20T14:16:00.000+10:002009-01-20T14:16:00.000+10:00VIKKI my girl: Take around the hat - $100 bills on...VIKKI my girl: Take around the hat - $100 bills only - and we can chat about bigger servings.<BR/>I will withstand the pressure!<BR/><BR/>As for Frank - he can answer for himself. I'm not buying into this.<BR/><BR/>Seriously though Vikki - that was a horrible experience and at first I wasn't sure that you weren't having a lend of me - it happening in Hollywood and all. I can absolutely understand that you would have felt creepy about it for some time. <BR/><BR/>JuneJune Savillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00194576632686640776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post-53031361137391395842009-01-20T12:05:00.000+10:002009-01-20T12:05:00.000+10:00Hey Judy- I'm not playing with June and you have a...Hey Judy- I'm not playing with June and you have a point. This is the way we do it in L.A.:<BR/> <BR/>We want longer chapters!We want longer chapters!We want longer chapters!We want longer chapters!We want longer chapters!We want longer chapters!<BR/><BR/>Big hugs Ms. June.<BR/>VikkiVikki Northhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00843590983216729306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post-19338434252426651362009-01-20T11:59:00.000+10:002009-01-20T11:59:00.000+10:00Hi June,You are the mistress of leaving us hanging...Hi June,<BR/>You are the mistress of leaving us hanging! My mind just spins. <BR/><BR/>If Frank has taken her out there to tell her he had an affair or even one night stand with Selene- he better have a darn good reason for not mentioning this up until this point. (I’m going to be real mad at him!)<BR/><BR/>Great Chapter, June. You’re just wonderful.<BR/><BR/>And-yes you can use my near ‘carjacking’. That kind of crime is really quite common in L.A.<BR/><BR/>None of us know how we’ll react when something like that happens. What I learned in later self defense courses is that I did the right thing. If he had made his way into my car, God only knows.<BR/><BR/>I was actually a bit more traumatized by it than I shared. It took me some time to get past it- but I did with the support of some good friends.<BR/>VikkiVikki Northhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00843590983216729306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post-82141746268648527372009-01-20T09:12:00.000+10:002009-01-20T09:12:00.000+10:00Love your comment confused - there is something sp...Love your comment confused - there is something special about 'er'. <BR/>JuneJune Savillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00194576632686640776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post-81167992801362927932009-01-20T08:37:00.000+10:002009-01-20T08:37:00.000+10:00Er is a treasure..he is one of my favorites too..:...Er is a treasure..he is one of my favorites too..:)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post-26291745368237634622009-01-20T06:49:00.000+10:002009-01-20T06:49:00.000+10:00Dear Judy, of course we both wrote our comments in...Dear Judy, of course we both wrote our comments in absolute fun. I was chuckling as I wrote mine. The bit that may have had you questioning was probably meant to be a smart (?) play on words. <BR/>We could never really misunderstand each other.<BR/>I really love the fact that you enjoy the story and thanks for telling us about that. Sorry if I caused even a moment of anxiety for you. <BR/>Hugs<BR/>JuneJune Savillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00194576632686640776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post-50572120386642112332009-01-19T23:35:00.000+10:002009-01-19T23:35:00.000+10:00June, I hope you know I am just playing with you a...June, I hope you know I am just playing with you and this was all in fun. You know how involved I am in this novel. It is one of the best I have read in years! I don't usually read fiction and can't believe how I am enjoying this one. Just goes to show what a wonderful writer you are!!!Judyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12078537002880283509noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post-36998406263970947242009-01-19T14:46:00.000+10:002009-01-19T14:46:00.000+10:00You are so FEARCE Judy! I'm ducking for cover in c...You are so FEARCE Judy! I'm ducking for cover in case you get out that six gun you told us about recently. Crikey!<BR/>Even the heading said it was about a picnic. <BR/>No care taken, no responsibility for people who don't take things literally (literary?) here.June Savillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00194576632686640776noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2106506707783681962.post-61899137631264392242009-01-19T13:25:00.000+10:002009-01-19T13:25:00.000+10:00June, Why in the hell are you asking about picnics...June, Why in the hell are you asking about picnics? Who cares about picnics? We want to know what he is about to tell her! Criky, or whatever it is you all say over there! Talk about leaving us hanging! You sure did this time. I could not believe that was it for this episode. Guess I have no other choice but to wait till next time. You devil you....lol.Judyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12078537002880283509noreply@blogger.com